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Corporation by enigmatic-J Corporation by enigmatic-J
Are they after me ?
Are they chasing me ?
I won't work for them
Why do they keep chasing me ?
Nowhere to go
They are everywhere
A wall
No way to escape
The red tie...


...I lost
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:iconsedated-son:
Fucking awesome man
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:iconyumiko-kato:
Yumiko-Kato Jul 25, 2007
Awesome idea with the background, it's not too busy and looks nice. I like the concept.

+favs
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anna3121 Apr 25, 2007
:wow: vraiment super!!!! C'est vraiment magnifique!!! :+fav:
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:iconpattison:
I like it. I wonder, is that guy "the man"?
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:iconsandman-z:
really nice!
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pepponen Dec 19, 2004
I like the general idea, but I'll just have to give a critical opinion, too; the athmosphere of the poem should been created more subtly, using milder words. Powerful terms such as "are they chasing me", "nowhere to go" and "they are everywhere" are too straightforwarded to create a menacing atmosphere. But that's just what I think.
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:iconenigmatic-j:
Yeah i agree,

I don't take enough time to tihnk about it ;)

i should though
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:iconktp:
its awesome! i love it! :heart:
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:iconenigmatic-j:
Thanks a lot.

I'm thinking of a second version but i'll keep that for later ;)

Stay tuned ^_^
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:iconktp:
awesome, cant wait! :)
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